Kids’ Corner: Poems 09
September 24, 2009 · Print This Article
3 POEMS
by
Amritansh Mishra
(age 10)
Dark & White
Dark is better than white
I don’t know the ‘white’
But I have seen white
or
White is better than dark
I do not know the Dark
but I have seen dark
These are the colours
that play with life
and I understand
the importance of the dark
and importance of the white
Reflection
I am the reflection
I don’t know whose
or
Someone is my reflection
I wonder if I know
Me is Me and I believe on me
because I live according to me
And
GOD is inside me
Truth
I live in ‘which’ place
I wonder if I know it
The thing that I see
I wonder if it is the truth
The thing that I hear
I wonder if it is the truth
But when I stress inside me
here is ‘HE’ which is the truth
I am truth because
GOD has made me
So he only knows
….
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Dear Amritansh
Welcome to the Kids’ Corner
Keep on writing wonderful poems
Bless You.
Dear Amritansh
Very nice poems. Keep it up.
Dear Amrit,
It is very pleasent to know that GOD has blessed you talent and mystic way to appreciate the life and the creations on this earth at this tender age. I feel proud of you.So is your family specially “Maa. A lot of good wishes for future.
You have the spark to create something great in your life.
Keep it up
Loving Papa
Hey Amrit,
I know this naughtiest Kid has the spark to lighten his life… God bless you … Great starting …
Priya Didi
Dear Amritansh
It is true that many a time we are blind to these small truths. May be the God in you thought of reminding us! Keep it up
Dear Amritansh,
Having read you, I can say ‘HE’ is in everyone, but ‘He’ is vibrant in you. You have proved your name given by your parents. Your thoughts are like drops of ‘AMRIT’ every one would like to have.
With best wishes and affection,
Loving Uncle.
Dear Amrit
You are simply amazing ! Kudos to you for achieving such great heights at such a young age. Just keep it up and never loose your focus. Your poem on TRUTH is really a nice one.
With best you
Dev Uncle
Dear Amrit,
I’m delight as well as impressed to see such a wonderful thought of yours in this tender age….”You’re doing a great job” Keep Up The Good Work!!!!
I want to see some more stuff in future form you.
Rahul Bhiya
Amritansh
Hari Om !
……. Keep on writing wonderful poems.
With Blessings,
Swami Brahmavidyananda Saraswati
Rishikesh Uttarakhand India
Dear Amritansh,
“Surrender is a primary step to be knowledgeable.”
Keep it up.
Dear Amrit,
The theme of poetries is very philosophical and true feelings for Almighty GOD inside, which would give you unlimited inspiration all the life for creativity.
Thanks
Your Uncle
Anil Trivedi
Dear Amrit,
You are a budding poet as you have real creativity and confidence to a great extent at this tender age. Really, one may know that you are the reflection of your father after reading this poem….We wish you all the best for your future endeavor and are eagerly waiting to read your next poem………………
With Love,
Sarita Bua, Tanu-Gullu
Allahabad
hye amrit ,
it’s very nice poem ,keep it up
Dear Amrit(ansh)
Your thoughts and creativity are wonderful. I would have missed a lot in case I missed reading your poems. May God be with you in all your endeavours to create fine poems stirring the souls.
With love, Uncle Y P
Brilliant poetry amritansh .keep it up
dear amritansh,
profound thoughts from a kid like u.
great beginning,all the best.
amber uncle
In this age? amazing creativity, Always listen to yourself.
Dear Amritansh
Really great thoughts.coming from your heart. (Atmic Shakti )
Keep Up.
Uncle
Dr.Brij
Having good thoughts and insight is good.
Having ability to express them in form of poetry is other blessing of GOD and
to spread worldwide (on world wide web) the voice of holly inner space is marvelous in this world.
Always remember and thank a lot to great GOD for blessing you with creative talent.
“SHUBH AASHISH”
Yours
Govind Bhaiya
Dear Amrit,
very good selection of words and excellent devotional emotions. All our good wishes 2 u. I am really impressed with ur talent.
GOD bless u……
with love..
ur uncle & aunti
DEHRADUN
Dear Amritansh,
I read your fablous creation. This is highly appreciable. Keep exploring. Wish you all the best for your great and successful career. Have a nice time. Himanshu…………..
The thought behind a 10 year old on simple things like clour ‘Dark and White’ and just words such has ‘Refection’ and ‘truth’… the child has actually put in life into these words made us realise what Life is all about. The words are so deep in thought at the same time so simple to understand, you feel like reading the poems again and again…the words that came to my mind to describe Amritansh is he is ‘super fanstastic’…keep it up little one you are actually bigger in your thoughts then most of us.God bless you.
I am so touched by your writing,Amritansh.So many kids of your age are busy having a good time,I am amazed by the depth you potray with your simple words.
Keep it up and God Bless.
Harpreet Sindhu.
Lovely Amrit,
Congratulations!
The selection of words, devotional power and the emotions put in the poems are just amazing!.
Keep it up dear. You can show the right path to live a wonderful life.
Laxmi Kant
Very creative. well done. good luck amritansh
regards
nakul
Dear Amritansh,
I was delighted to read your poems and the voice you give to your words. In simplicity you find your truth and I wish you luck.
Happy writing poems!
Best wishes and good luck.
Amtojh
Dear Amrit
While going through your poems I wondered what your age could be .Tried to guess and then looked up to check!!My guess was wrong.
Such heavy thoughts coming from a child of just 10 yrs is a miracle in itself.Keep going .i am sure you will climb the ladder of great suceess in future.God bless you!
Mita aunty
Beautiful sentiments Amrit.
You are younger then my youngest child and still I feel small and insignificant in face of your glow.
Keep the spirit shining.
hello Amrit,
i have gone through your creations off very late. it is mesmersing and giving insight of the vibrancy of colors,truth and god.
in the hindsight it gives the strength to the individuals to live the life with the brave face, come what may!
keep the good work get going.
with love and best wishes
Mama,mami and yeshu
dear Amrit,
i have gone through into your creations very late.it is so mesmerising giving insight of the colors,truth and god.
in the hidesign it gives strength to the individuals to face the life come what May!
wish you all the best .anticipatings more sparkles from you in future too.
with love,
Mama,Mami,Yeshu
‘Honhar birwan ke hot chikne pat’.The world expect a lot from you and India.Keep it up.
Virendra
Dear Amritansh
I am really surprised and happy also to read your poems .So much depth and insight at this tender age its unbelievable I wish you all the best for your future writings .I pray to God that you always walk this noble path with strength and determination. May God bless you. with love and blessings. Neeraj Goswami
was jus cheaking the site. just came across this section of poems written by kids ……and i could not help but wonder that a 10 yr old can have such maturity and can understand life so deeply……u r a store-house of talent my dear…keep it up ….little champ….god bless!
first of all i will congratulate u for undertaking such a beautiful venture of writting poems ……..
DARK AND WHITE-….makes us realise that it doesnt always need gray hair” to THINK”……the black haired kids can do the same.
REFLECTION- I jus love this title……a word which often says lot more than what it actuallly means……
TRUTH-…..HMMM…….this poem does’nt need proof of its beauty and sagacity……the “TRUTH IS ITS OWN EVIDENCE” .
twinkle twinkle …a little star…….called amritansh…
how i wonder …what a little philosopher that u r…..
rise up, above in the world so high…..and be the diamond of the sky…..
KEEP THINKING….KEEP WRITING…..u can easily be the next socrates………………………
Dear Amritansh, you are you bcz u believe in u. Keep this spirit up. Good job done. Ur teacher Rajiv
” I wonder the “TRUTH” which is a perfect ” REFLECTION” of ur ability to analyse the two most intense colours of life ” THE DARK AND WHITE”……………
BUT My sweetheart u r blessed with many such things and its just the tip of the iceberg….. I felt so haapy to read such thoughts but believe me not at all surprised as u hv inherited all the things and wl show it now or then………….
So My little baby it’s just the starting…….. and i know u will keep it up……
With Lots of Love………….
Shalu masi.
Dear Amrit,
I enjoyed reading your poems. Keep at it. Listen to the one inside you. The one who writes the poetry.
Best bardic wishes for the future,
Gwilym Williams
Fantastic
Hi. I dint see this earlier. my favorite is dark and white because its a rare interplay of colors and philosophy… something like good versus evil. Keep up the good work boy! Perhaps after sometime, read your own poems again and reflect.
Dear Amritansh!!
I was so impressed to read you poems today. What and AWESOME job! Keep up the great work.
I can’t wait to see your next creation soon!
Love
Anupama Bua
The best about your writing is that you are confident and believe in your own self…. I love the way you have penned your thoughts by taking the topic as deep as you could … It is lovely ….
Best wishes
Mallika.
hi buddy
hats off 2 ur creativity…………God Bless u baby
luv u……..explore ueself as much as u can…..hopin 2 read more stuff …………………
cheers
meenia