Kids’ Corner: Poem 07
December 7, 2008 · Print This Article
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EK SAPNA
by
Anagha Mudgal
(age 10)
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एक सपना
एक सपना
… कैसा ये सपना
एक रात मैंने देखा
मैं रौशनियों से घिरी
तारों से लिखी
एक लकीर बनती जा रही थी
मैं एक चाँद का गोला
एक मोटी व्हेल
छोटे – छोटे फूलों से घिरी
वहाँ थी परियाँ
और मैं
ऐसा एक सपना
देखा मैंने
– अनघा मुद्गल
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(For the benefit of our non-Hindi speaking friends, given below is our attempted English translation of this poem. – Website Editors)
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A Dream
A dream
… what a dream
I saw one night
A line, surrounded by lights
scribbled by the stars
was what I was turning into
I, a lunar circle
a fat whale
surrounded by little flowers
There were fairies
and me
Such a dream
I saw
- Anagha Mudgal
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Dear Anagha,
Welcome to Sadho.
Your dream… and those of the other young poets, make our lives and the Sadho website beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your lovely poem with us.
sabse pahle to ye naam (anagha) bahut sunder hai….
Chhotee see kavita… bahut saral hai kavita…
magar aaj ke daur mein, ye jawab hai
kunthaon kaa aur atee- pratikriyavaadee hone kaa.
agar bacche aisee duniya mein rehna chahte hain to
hum tv kaa har kona terrorism, road-rage aur chaunkaane wale dukhant se kyon bharte hain….
ek aur baar…
isee website par Sarveshwar Dayal Saxena kee ek mashhoor kavita hai…”Uth Meri Betee Subah Ho Gayee..”
Anagha kee kavita mujhe us kavita kee yaad dilatee hai….
ya yun kahen…kee donon kavitayen ek doosre se baat kartee lag rahee hain…
jaise betee ne uthne ke baad, der se uthne kee wajah bataayee ho…
sapne dekhiye aur likhte rahiye…
a beautiful poem. so inncoent, simple and imaginative. this poem shows a promise of little miss Anagha becoming a great poet someday. keep it up and god bless.
“मैं एक चाँद का गोला
एक मोटी व्हेल
छोटे – छोटे फूलों से घिरी
वहाँ थी परियाँ
और मैं”
बहुत बढ़िया लिखा है. मेरी चोटी सी बिटिया को भी बहुत अच्छी लगी. अगली कविता कब लिख रही हो ? जल्दी ही लिखना.
Pyaari Anagha, your world is so beautiful…so natural…pure..
Thank God, that you didn’t become a big car or a truck!!
It is a poetic expression straight from the heart-just as your felt…hoping to see more of YOUR world…
very nice poem keep on writing it my dear anagha
-bhaiya
Anagha, good job. We look forward for more poetry from you. Thanks, Jaspreet.
Taaron se likhi lakeer! What a beautiful thought and line. Great!
Vishakh
Beautiful…… an entire world of imagination… gathered into a few lines…… mark of a promising poet!!
Keep it up Darling!!
I am proud of you.
very good anagha keep it up .very simple poem. looking for more….
poems from you…………!!!!!!!!!!!!
My Dear Anagha,
It’s a beautiful dream. I loved it.
Keep it up. Looking forward to read more….
Lots of Love
Anagha ki kavita padhane par barbas hi daadi maan ki gond yaad aa jati hai, jahan so kar, baith kar chand ke baare mei khoob kahaniyan sunate the aur taare tho hame hamare saathi nazar aate the. Aur din raat manohari smritiyon mei khoye rahate the.
Bahut Bahut dhanyawaad Anagha mujhe mere bachpan mei le jaane ke liye.
Aage thumhari aur rachanayen padh kar aur smritiyon mei khone ka intzaar rahega.
nirantar likhate rahe taki hum nirantar aaj bhi achhe sapane dekh sake.
Dear Anagha,
You done a marvelous work dear. You lift the reader to the heaven of imagination. It is very nice and keep it up
bahut achhi kavit lilkhi ho angha. likhti raho, apni dadi ki paramparo ko age badhao
excellent anagha.
beautiful poem.
keep it up. i would also like to see what happened with the ‘parees’ in the next poem
bahut hii nischal aur pyaari kavita likhii hai.aashaa hai kii aise hii sapne dekhte raho aur use kavita ke rang me dhalte raho….
you have the talent and you should keep writing.
all the very best to our dear budding poetess!!!
well, this poem is quite soothing and very natural ..i totally go with kavita behal’s comment……..
keep it up!!
a really wonderful poem… hope you write more and do excel in this field… keep it up!!
Saabash Anagha ! You are the representative of great writers like Chitra Mudgal and Shabd Kumar. Keep it up.
NANA
yeh padhkar maine bhi ek sapna dekha ki little angha bade hokar ek bahut acchi poetess banegi….
well done!
payari bitiya,
bahut hi achcha likha hain……aakhir poti kiski ho…..daadi dada se jayada naam karna hain aur lagataar likhte rahna hain………एक सपना
… कैसा ये सपना
एक रात मैंने देखा
Kal raat maine bhi dekha hain ek sapna……..Angha yehi pankti to saari dunia ko jivan deti hain…….bahut badia beti…………god bless you.
Deepak Sharma
UAE
hi angha,
you used to be so quiet and so serious all the time that i was there in delhi,i should have known that STILL WATER RUNS DEEP,keep it up my child, i know you will write many more poems in future,because you are a fairy,who iknow will speard the message of love through poems, waiting for your next one egarly
dear anagha
your dream lines are very powerfull and imaginative , you have woven a good potrayal of your dreams .keep it up and keep writing them always . very very interesting . we would love to read more.
love
sanjay gayatri
ek baar phir….
subah ke snan kee tarah fresh kartee hai ye kavita…
dhanyawad
vimal
pata nahi magar yakeen nahi hota ki chand par jane wali itni nanhi si bachichi hai .god bless u anagha
ek sapna a very nice poem Anagha Mudgal my best wishes for your better future
i like your kavita its very wonderful